Assignment Discovery Great Books Dantes Inferno

She read it in Italian:

“Noi leggevam quel giorno per diletto

Di Lancelotto, come l’amor lo strinse.”

After the sound “-letto” ends the first line, the placing of “-lotto” at the start of the second line gives it the power of a rhyme, only more so. How does that happen? You have to look within. The Italian 11-syllable line feels a bit like our standard English iambic pentameter and therefore tends to mislead you into thinking that the terzina, the recurring unit of three lines, has a rocking regularity. But Dante isn’t thinking of regularity in the first instance any more than he is thinking of rhyme, which is too easy in Italian to be thought a technical challenge: in fact for an Italian poet it’s not rhyming that’s hard.

Dante’s overt rhyme scheme is only the initial framework by which the verse structure moves forward. Within the terzina, there is all this other intense interaction going on. (Dante is the greatest exemplar in literary history of the principle advanced by Vernon Watkins, and much approved of by Philip Larkin, that good poetry doesn’t just rhyme at the end of the lines, it rhymes all along the line.) Especially in modern times, translators into English have tended to think that if this interior intensity can be duplicated, the grand structure of the terzina, or some equivalent rhymed framework, can be left out. And so it can, often with impressive results, each passage transmuted into very compressed English prose. But that approach can never transmit the full intensity of “The Divine Comedy”, which is notable for its overall onward drive as much as for its local density of language.

Though the Paolo and Francesca episode is assembled from minutely wrought effects, it really does have rhythmic sweep. My wife, clearly touched by my impersonation of a proper student, said the rest of the poem was like that, including the supposedly colourless theological bits. Every moment danced, and the dance was always moving forward.

Over the next year or so, while I was reading Dante in the original to satisfy the requirements of the English tripos at Cambridge, I looked at several rhymed translations and found them strained. On the other hand the translations done in prose had whole chunks that were too dull to read, especially in the second and third books. The total effect of looking at so many translations was to be convinced that the job was thankless. One thing I could see clearly, however, was that any even halfway successful translation would have to rhyme, although the question was how, especially in those long stretches, later on in the poem, where not a lot seemed to be happening.

You could see easily whyByronwent no further than his Paolo and Francesca; he couldn’t keep up the excitement if there was nothing for the excitement to bite on, as it were. Starting from the level of incident, he, or any other translator, couldn’t get down to the level of language. They could raise themselves to the level of thought: some of the translators were, mutatis mutandis, as educated as Dante was, who was one of the most educated men of his time even in the conventional sense, quite apart from the protoscientific sense in which he was original without parallel. But they couldn’t, or wouldn’t, get down to the level where syllables met each other and generated force. That had to be the aim, impossible as it seemed; to generate the force of both meaning and sound. Indeed, in the original, some of the meaning was in the sound. Unless a translator did something to duplicate how the poem sounded, he, or she, wouldn’t get near what it meant.

So the task, if task it was, went on the back burner and stayed there for about 40 years. I was barely aware that I was even thinking about it. Helping me to be diffident on the topic were my memories of what my wife had said about the Dorothy Sayers translation. Back at Sydney University, when we first met in the late Fifties, she was studying Italian: the beginning of what would turn out to be a distinguished lifelong career of teaching and editing Italian literature, with particular attention to Dante. As part of the course, she had been required to produce a substantial paper; and she had made her subject the Sayers translation, which was famous at the time and indeed is still well-known: the total amount of money it has made for Penguin must be colossal. But my wife, always the closest of readers, was able even then to detect that Sayers had simultaneously loaded her text with cliché and pumped it full of wind.

Finally, not long after I retired, I thought I could see how a translation might work. I started by drawing the necessary conclusions from my knowledge of what to avoid. The first thing I had learnt was that a strict terza rima was out of the question. Even Louis MacNeice, one of the great verse technicians of modern times, had resorted to half-rhyme in order to sustain a long poem in terza rima. And the sad truth about “Autumn Sequel” is that it is simply terrible. Its predecessor, “Autumn Journal”, had been a triumph – it should be ranked, in my view, as the great long poem of its time – but for that work he had allowed himself access to his vast stock of classical metres. In “Autumn Sequel” he stuck himself with the terza rima, and with a not very attractive version of it.

Final circle: the giant with Dante and Virgil

I tried writing a longish poem in strict terza rima and could see that it was creaking with strain the longer it went on, thereby accomplishing the opposite of the desirable effect of a narrative form, which is to get you into the swing of the thing. With the dubious exception of Shelley’s “The Triumph of Life”, nobody has ever written a terza rima poem in English that makes you forget the form in which it is composed, and a terza rima translation of Dante like Laurence Binyon’s makes a feature of Binyon’s virtuosity rather than Dante’s mastery. So if it couldn’t be in strict terza rima, and if a loosely rhymed terza rima wasn't worth writing, what regular measure would carry the freight?

Over the years I had written thousands of couplets and although I enjoyed using them for comic effect I knew that they wouldn’t fit this task. The Divine Comedy isn’t comic. A few couplets might come in handy to clinch each canto but on the whole the couplet suffers the drawback that Johnson spotted in the work of Pope: in a rhyme-starved language like English, the same rhyme sound keeps cropping up too early. Even if the words that rhyme are kept deliberately different each time – night/bright, light/sight, etc – the sound is the same, and calls the wrong kind of attention to itself. And yet I wanted the rhyming words to be close enough together to be noticed.

Finally I realised that I had been practising for this job every time I wrote a quatrain. In my poems, ever since I started writing them in the late Fifties, the quatrain was the most common measure unless I was writing in free verse. Decades of practice had made the quatrain so natural to me that it had become a mode of thought. For this project, if the quatrain could be augmented with extra lines whenever the occasion demanded or opportunity offered, it would yield the ideal combination of strictness and ease.

To reinforce the strictness, I would avoid feminine rhymes. When writing couplets, one veers inexorably towards feminine rhymes, and the effect, though often usefully flippant, is always in danger of recalling Gilbert and Sullivan. To match Dante’s gravitas, a strong, solid dignity would be required. Well, I had had plenty of practice in writing quatrains with masculine rhymes. So really I had spent all this time – the greater part of a lifetime – preparing my instruments.

Quietly I got the project under way, starting with the first line of the first canto. It would be a mistake to do the famous passages and then join them up: the welds might show. If my modified quatrain measure was to justify itself, it would have to work from the beginning, and be still working at the end – because The Divine Comedy ends as it begins, with the same feeling of exuberance that has been maintained throughout. Dante registers this exuberance even in his most desperate moments. He doesn’t stop singing just because something dreadful is happening. What he says is: something dreadful is happening even as I sing. It’s an interplay of form and content: the most ambitious that any literary artist ever attempted. Dante’s torrential cascade of poetic effects adds up to a claim. No poem could be equal to my subject: no poem except this poem.

I wanted my translation to provide parallels for such effects while maintaining all of Dante’s sense of economy. No poet, not even Shakespeare, could say quite so much so quickly, so the translator must know how to be brief. But there are things he can add without slowing the pace. (Or, indeed, taking more space: since English needs less room than Italian, there is latitude for adding things while keeping to the same length as the original.)

Dante had barely finished the poem before the first commentaries began appearing. Commentary was thought necessary because Dante had composed every canto of his poem as if it were a weekend article based on news that had only just happened, and whose details did not need to be outlined. There must have been readers who, not having heard the news about who robbed whom and which pope double-crossed which prince, were puzzled even at the time.

Since then, the chances of being puzzled have multiplied, and there is also the increasingly pressing matter of making even references to the Gospels clear to readers who might not be familiar with them. The first commentaries inaugurated 700 years of scholarship and criticism which have gone on to this day, and the summary of all that knowledge and informed speculation is there at the foot of the page in any scholarly edition. But this translation would be for non-scholars in the first instance. Footnotes would be a burden to it. Ideally, the thing itself should carry all the information it would need. How to do this?

Doomed: 'Francesca da Rimini and Paolo Malatesta' by Jean-Auguste-Dominique Ingres

The reservoir of material at the foot of the page of a scholarly text (sometimes there are five lines of text and 50 of apparatus) provides the translator of the poem with an ideal opportunity to upload salient facts into the verse narrative and make things clear. There are stretches in all three books when it really helps to be told who belongs to which family; whether one family is at war with another; and what precisely happened to which city when it was betrayed. On the vexed question of theology – this crops up especially in the third book, Heaven – it can help to be told that a certain scholar represents a certain position. Almost always the relevant information is there on the page, down at the bottom. In numerous instances I felt justified in lifting it out of the basement and putting it on display in the text. It might seem bold to assume that Dante, if he thought the reader might not know, would have explained which features of a certain scholarly dispute he was referring to, but we can also assume that he didn’t want the reader to be presented with an insoluble puzzle. Dante wanted to be read. Every stratagem he employed tells us that. He was talking about the whole of creation at once but he wanted to glue the reader to the bench.

To help him do it for the present age, I opened up a way to make simple, sparing but sufficiently wide-ranging use of what we might call the basic scholarly heritage. My aim, when importing an explanatory detail, was to make the text more readable instead of less. Also I have cut back on his lists of names here and there, when a list is all it is. Perhaps boldly, I would say that all the reader needs to know is in the poem as I have presented it. As Dante, in Heaven, travels all over the sky, some of the references to the zodiac might seem obscure, but they probably seemed so at the time: and really that’s all you have to know, that the references sounded learned.

Dante’s first readers could take the more obscure points for granted while they followed the main points. My job was to make some of the main points more self-clarifying by putting in some of the explanations that had been accumulating at the bottom of the page for the best part of a millennium, but to do so without slowing the tempo. The result one hopes for is a readily appreciable outline of Dante’s Christian vision. Is it possible, though, in an age without belief?

Well, how much does Dante believe? The truth is that he didn’t want to believe anything if he couldn’t test it. As we trace the story through 100 cantos, three regions and every shade of emotion from despair to bliss, we find that he believed in his journey to salvation. But if his belief had been without its doubts, there would never have been a journey; and at the very end we find ourselves concluding that the great poet, setting out the reasons for his faith, has reached conclusions that will eventually make blind faith impossible. Dante could ask questions about theology because he was in love with questioning itself; he was in love with the design of the divinely inspired universe because he was in love with design, which he could see in a fold of cloth and a fallen leaf.

Dante had a scientific mind: one of the first scientific minds we know of in the modern age, for which, indeed, he can be said to have built the foundations. His poem stands at the dawn of modern science, and therefore of the times we live in now: its essential moment is in its final vision, when Dante the traveller, at the apex of heaven, looks into the source of creation and sees the imprint of a human face. The Divine Comedy is the precursor of the whole of modern history, and I hope this translation conveys enough of its model to show that he forecast the whole story in a single song: a song of lights. The joy of discovery is what drives the poem, and if my translation gets some of that exultation into English verse then it will have done its work.

For all his majestic weight, there is also a lightness to Dante, and I hope to have got that in.

Finally but essentially, tempo is one of the two main poetic elements in play. The other is texture. What we have, in this miraculous work of art, is a mutually reinforcing balance of tempo and texture, of a kind that had never been heard before over such a distance. Much as he worshipped Virgil, Dante was better at it than his master. If he could have read Homer, he would have found that he was better at it than Homer too. In the original Italian, you can hear it. But most of us will never read Dante in the original Italian. It’s a pious wish that translators are always making: they hope that the reader, intrigued by the translation, will be driven to learn Italian, etc. Common sense tells us that it will seldom happen.

To know a foreign language thoroughly is a big task, and to know its literature is a full-time job. For more than 50 years, my wife’s scholarship, her tenacity and seriousness of purpose, have been there to remind me of what it means to be dedicated to Dante and to help pass on the body of knowledge associated with his name. Her work culminated first with her gold-medal-winning edition of Dante’s “Monarchia” for the Società Dantesca Italiana, the only national edition of any work of Dante edited by a non-Italian, and a labour of love that took her 30 years. It culminated all over again with the completion of her digital edition of The Divine Comedy’s manuscript tradition, a tool for all Dante scholars, and a thing of extraordinary beauty and utility. I hope she will forgive me for straying onto her territory, but really there is no contest.

Beside her lucid and scrupulous scholarship, a translation counts for very little. But I have done my best with it, always encouraged by the memory of how, in Florence, she first gave me an idea of what it meant to be in the service of her great poet.

From The Divine Comedy, Book One: Hell

At the mid-point of the path through life, I found

Myself lost in a wood so dark, the way

Ahead was blotted out. The keening sound

I still make shows how hard it is to say

How harsh and bitter that place felt to me—

Merely to think of it renews the fear—

So bad that death by only a degree

Could possibly be worse. As you shall hear,

It led to good things too, eventually,

But there and then I saw no sign of those,

And can’t say even now how I had come

To be there, stunned and following my nose

Away from the straight path. And then, still numb

From pressure on the heart, still in a daze,

I stumbled on the threshold of a hill

Where trees no longer grew. Lifting my gaze,

I saw its shoulders edged with overspill

From our sure guide, the sun, whose soothing rays

At least a little melted what that night

Of dread had done to harden my heart’s lake—

And like someone who crawls, half dead with fright,

Out of the sea, and breathes, and turns to take

A long look at the water, so my soul,

Still thinking of escape from the dark wood

I had escaped, looked back to see it whole,

The force field no one ever has withstood

And stayed alive. I rested for a while,

And then resumed, along the empty slope,

My journey, in the standard crofter’s style,

Weight on the lower foot. Harder to cope

When things got steeper, and a mountain cat

With parti-coloured pelt, light on its feet,

In a trice was in my face and stayed like that,

Barring my way, encouraging retreat.

Translated from the Italian by Clive James

The Divine Comedy by Clive James

Picador, t £22.99 (plus £1.35 p&p) 0844 871 1514 (RRP £25.00)

Follow @TelegraphBooks

Great Books: Dante’s Inferno: Teacher’s GuideGrade Level: 9-12 Curriculum Focus: Literature Lesson Duration: One to two class periodsProgram DescriptionWhat are the consequences of our choices? Explore the dark side of human nature and theconsequences of sin. Dante’s interpretation of the afterlife has endured as one of the mostinsightful and scathing reviews of humanity. This program reveals why his 14th-century poem hasbecome our defining vision of hell.Onscreen QuestionsBefore watching the video • What is sin? Throughout history, religions and cultures have defined sin in different ways. As you watch the program, consider how Dante, a 14th-century poet and philosopher, regarded sin. • What roles do personal choice and the soul play in Dante’s explanation of sin? Do you agree or disagree with him?After watching the video • Dante wrote that all hope should be abandoned at the gates of hell. Explain the historical and personal contexts of his writings. • Why do you think he chose the metaphor of hell to depict life during the Middle Ages?Lesson PlanStudent Objectives • Discuss the main ideas in The Inferno, by Dante Alighieri. • Create a geography of hell that includes nine circles, with specific sins identified for each circle. • Identify a guide for their journey. • Determine what constitutes moral redemption in their geography of hell.


Great Books: Dante’s Inferno: Teacher’s Guide 2Materials • Great Books: Dante’s Inferno video and VCR • Paper, pens, pencils • Copies of the book The Inferno, by Dante Alighieri • Poster board and markers • ComputerProcedures 1. Begin the lesson by discussing the main ideas in The Inferno. Help students understand that the author, Dante Alighieri, claims that before achieving moral redemption, an individual must take a hard look at evil both in the world and in himself. Only by confronting inner evil can people achieve self-knowledge, which is the first step toward redemption. Dante also says that people should not be expected to make their journey alone; they need a guide to help them. For Dante’s own journey, as described in his book, he chose the poet Virgil to guide him through hell. 2. Review with students Dante’s nine circles of hell, which are summarized below: • Limbo, which includes people waiting to see if they enter heaven or descend to hell. • Lustful, Gluttonous, Avaricious. These three circles represent sins of weakness. They are mostly harmful things that we do to ourselves. • Wrathful, Heretics (those who betrayed others), and Violent. These three circles represent sins of malice. They were premeditated and usually involved actions toward other people. • The Fraudulent and the Treacherous. These last two circles represent sins of betrayal and pride, considered the worst sins of all. Satan, who betrayed God, represents the epitome of evil. 3. To give students a visual image of what Dante’s vision of hell may have looked like, show the first several minutes of the video; pay particular attention to the scenes that portray the first circles of hell and the final two circles. 4. Divide the class into groups of three or four students. Explain that the task for each group is to develop a geography of hell based on their life experiences. Have students decide which sins belong inside each circle of hell. If students think Dante’s circles are appropriate, they can use them. To complete their portrayal of hell, have students select a guide and brainstorm ideas about the meaning of moral redemption. 5. Tell students that they can draw their geography of hell on a piece of poster board or create it on the computer. Students should include two or three paragraphs describing the meaning of each circle, why that circle belongs in hell, the reason for selecting a particular guide, and an explanation of moral redemption.Published by Discovery Education. © 2005. All rights reserved.


Great Books: Dante’s Inferno: Teacher’s Guide 3 6. Give students time in class to complete their projects. Then have students share their posters or computer printouts. Did most students come up with similar ideas, or are their geographies of hell unique? Who did students select as their guides, and why? Finally, what are students’ ideas about moral redemption? 7. Conclude the lesson by discussing what students learned from this activity. Did they find it relevant to their own experiences? What did students learn about themselves as a result of thinking about these issues?Assessment Use the following three-point rubric to evaluate students’ work during this lesson. • 3 points: Students thought very creatively in developing their geography of hell; carefully selected an appropriate guide for the journey; and wrote clear, well-constructed descriptive paragraphs. • 2 points: Students thought creatively in developing their geography of hell; selected a guide for their journey; and wrote adequate, somewhat-descriptive paragraphs. • 1 point: Students had difficulty developing their geography of hell; did not select a guide for their journey; and did not complete the descriptive paragraphs.Vocabulary Dante Alighieri Definition: An Italian poet who lived from 1265 to 1321, considered one of the greatest poets of the Middle Ages Context: The Inferno is the first book in Dante Alighieri’s famous trilogy The Divine Comedy; the other two books are Purgatorio and Paradiso. inferno Definition: Literally, intense heat; also used to refer to a place with the characteristics of hell Context: Since the publication of The Inferno in about 1308, the word “inferno” has become synonymous with the concept of hell. moral redemption Definition: The capacity to transcend one’s own limitations and reach a new level of self- knowledge Context: According to Dante, the road to moral redemption can be reached only after confronting evil in the world and in one’s self. nine circles of hell Definition: The designation of different kinds of sins beginning with sins of weakness, moving down to sins of malice, followed by sins of fraud and disloyalty, and finally descending to sins of betrayal and pridePublished by Discovery Education. © 2005. All rights reserved.


Great Books: Dante’s Inferno: Teacher’s Guide 4 Context: The image of Satan frozen in ice in the last of Dante’s nine circles of hell is a powerful symbol of pure evil. Virgil Definition: A poet who lived in ancient Rome between 70 and 19 B.C., considered one of the great poets of world literature Context: Dante may have selected Virgil as his guide through hell because Virgil was a great literary and moral role model.Academic Standards National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE ) The National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE) and the International Reading Association have developed national standards to provide guidelines for teaching the English language arts. To view the standards online, go to http://www.ncte.org/about/over/standards/110846.htm. This lesson plan addresses the following standards: • Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textural features. • Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience. Mid-continent Research for Education and Learning (McREL) McREL's Content Knowledge: A Compendium of Standards and Benchmarks for K-12 Education addresses 14 content areas. To view the standards and benchmarks, visit link: http://www.mcrel.org/compendium/browse.asp This lesson plan addresses the following national standards: • Language Arts—Reading: Uses reading skills and strategies to understand and interpret a variety of literary textsSupport MaterialsDevelop custom worksheets, educational puzzles, online quizzes, and more with the free teaching toolsoffered on the Discoveryschool.com Web site. Create and print support materials, or save them to aCustom Classroom account for future use. To learn more, visit • http://school.discovery.com/teachingtools/teachingtools.htmlPublished by Discovery Education. © 2005. All rights reserved.


0 Thoughts to “Assignment Discovery Great Books Dantes Inferno

Leave a comment

L'indirizzo email non verrà pubblicato. I campi obbligatori sono contrassegnati *